Speaking: You were very comfortable answering the questions and it was just natural for you now to add more details. When you made some errors, you didn't take a pause, so it didn't affect your fluency. We just need to practice self-correcting, so you'll also become more aware of your grammar and pronunciation.

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Grammar: Please take note of your common errors:

​You said: Sometimes I sleep for 11 hours when I have to go to school. Sometimes, I sleep for 12 hours.

​Better: Sometimes I sleep for 11 hours when I have to go to school. Other times, I sleep for 12 hours.

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You said: I spend around one to three hours studying English every day. I study

English at the kindergarten, and have online English class, and read English books.

​Correct: I spend around one to three hours studying English every day.

I study English at the kindergarten, have online English class, and

read English books.

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Vocabulary: Please take note of these words:

​​body clock

fried rice with tuna

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​Overall Feedback: Great job for always managing to make your answers interesting! The details you add to your answers also help a lot and your sentences have become much better. Just take note and don't forget to correct your errors when you speak. Keep up the good work! ^^