Great Job today Chester~! You answered the questions well and in detail. Keep up the good work~!

Here are some corrections and a much better way to say it.

You said: (Chuseuk topic) to move at home.... 

Correct: To visit home

You said: ...big money and going abroad rarely happen so It's more valuable for me.  

Better: ... a lot of money and going abroad rarely happens so It's more valuable to me. 

You said: First, go abroad. Second, have a good plan. Third, good people to go with. Fourth, no accident or disaster to happen, and be safe. 

Better: First, go abroad. Second, have a well-organized plan. Third, nice people to go with. Lastly, no unforeseen circumstances or disasters to happen, and be safe/ out of harm's way.  

You said: She are very confident now.

Correct: She is very confident now. 

You said: In the morning when I don't want to go to my workplace. 

Better: In the morning when I don't have the motivation to go to my workplace. 

You said: They have never seen snowing. 

Correct: They have never seen snow. 

You said: They will not see snowing in their vacation time. 

Correct: They will not see the snow during their vacation.

Better: They will not witness the snow during their vacation.