Class Feedback (수업 피드백) | |
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Level | Beginner |
Date | 2022.09.01 21:00 Korean time |
Topic | Speaking: Money |
Remarks |
Great Job today Jenny~ You answered the questions well. But please answer in complete sentences next time instead of starting with because you can start with "I think...." , "(topic) is..." , " It will be..." , etc... Below are the corrections~ Please check.
You said: because money can do buy some food, so we can live. Correct: Money is important because we can buy some food so that we can live our life.
You said: I'm die, because I don't have money I can't buy food and I don't have house. Correct: I can't live without money because I will not be able to buy food and I will not have a house.
You said: A week because I have to I will have to get allowance a week. Correct: I think about money in a week because I receive my allowance once a week. |