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Class Feedback (수업 피드백)
 
Level Beginner
 
Date 2022.09.01 21:00 Korean time
 
Topic Speaking: Money
 
Remarks

Great Job today Jenny~ You answered the questions well. But please answer in complete sentences next time instead of starting with because you can start with "I think...." , "(topic) is..." , " It will be..." , etc... Below are the corrections~ Please check.

 

You said: because money can do buy some food, so we can live.

Correct: Money is important because we can buy some food so that we can live our life.

 

You said: I'm die, because I don't have money I can't buy food and I don't have house.

Correct: I can't live without money because I will not be able to buy food and I will not have a house.

 

You said: A week because I have to I will have to get allowance a week.

Correct: I think about money in a week because I receive my allowance once a week.


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