Class Feedback (수업 피드백) | |
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Level | Intermediate |
Date | 2022.09.04 22:00 Korean time |
Topic | Power Speaking: Kids |
Remarks |
You did a fantastic job today~ Your answers are on point. You were able to express what you would like to say. You also gave examples and the flow is also great. Your vocabulary is also great. Keep up the amazing job~
You said: Taking care of babies takes too much time and money. Parents should sacrifice too much things. Better: Taking care of babies will take a lot of our time and we will need to earn a lot of money. Being a parent you must sacrifice a lot of things.
You said: They're very different. For example, girls need more like skirts, hairpins.... while boys only need simple .... Better: They're very different. Especially when it comes to their needs. Girls need more things more than boys. For example, skirts, jewelry, accessories, etc. while boys prefer simple and comfortable items.
You said: I should teach how to live together with others, like making friends or having.... Better: I should teach them how to have good relationships and how to socialize with other people.
You said: Parents should trust their child in other way the child should trust tehir parents. Better: Parents should trust their children and vice versa.
Vocabulary: -reminisce= remember and talk about past experiences. -conformist= behaving in a way where most people think is socially correct or suitable; conservative - following suit= follow the example of another -immensely= of great size, huge -rebellious= opposing authority or the accepted rules |