Class Feedback (수업 피드백) | |
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Level | High beginner |
Date |
2022.09.14 21:00 Korean time |
Topic | What should he do? |
Remarks |
Very good today Celina~ At first you had difficulty giving some advice but you did your best to answer all of the problems ~! that's why you were able to give awesome advice ~ Great Job! There are a few corrections in the grammar and below are also some examples of answers to the questions.
Q1. He has discovered that his young son has started smoking. What should he do? You said: He trash the young sons smoke. He scold for young son about smoking. Brake sons smoke. Correct: He should throw his son's cigarette and scold him to stop smoking and if it will happen again he should brake his cigarettes.
Q7. His girlfriend is always on some fad diet and is getting sick as a result. What should he do? You said: He worry about his girlfriend he come to girlfriend hospital. He buy IV fluid for his girlfriend. Save her girlfriend. Correct: He is worried about his girlfriend so he should take care of her in the hospital. Better: He should talk to his girlfriend about the fad diet and stop her from doing it cause she is just hurting herself and it's affecting her health. And explain to her that she doesn't need to go on a diet cause she's already beautiful.
Q20. His brother has committed a serious crime and needs an alibi. What should he do? You said: He says all of his brother for police. Correct: He must tell the police about all of his brother's crimes. |