Class Feedback (수업 피드백) | |
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Level | Intermediate |
Date | 2022.09.18 22:00 Korean time |
Topic | How to get promoted? |
Remarks |
You did an awesome job today~! You were able to answer the questions well and you were able to express yourself and your ideas at the same time you give examples to support your answers, which is really great because it can explain more about your opinion and it'll be easier to understand it. You're also aware of your weaknesses and are willing to improve them. Keep up the great job~! Below are some of your answers and the best way to say them.
You said: I think working relationship means catching the point of boss and direction in work. In small talk catching well, hear well, and listen well in the topics what are the boss interested in days, upcoming meetings and.... Better: I think a working relationship means understanding your boss, especially their point and the direction of the work. In small talk being able to have great interpersonal skills.....
You said: .... the womens that set benefits is less... Correct: .... the women that set the benefits are less... *** Note: woman= singular; women= plural
You said: I think in teaching because many parents prefer women because womens are more considerate or patient. Better: I think in teaching because a lot of parents prefer women because they're more considerate or patient.
You said: I read an article about that Men are better with math and...... womens have more sympathy better skills, women can express than guys... Better: I read an article that says men have great intellectual skills while women have great empathic skills.
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