Class Feedback (수업 피드백) | |
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Level | Intermediate |
Date | 2022.10.09 22:00 Korean time |
Topic | TV Commercials |
Remarks |
You did an amazing job today~ Your grammar is on point, and you also shared examples of your answer and opinion. You also did a great job with the use of vocabulary but there is just some vocabulary that we need to upgrade. Below are the examples. Overall, Keep up the great Job~!
You said: show off the product. or exaggerate Better: exaggerate or overemphasize
You said: assembled many sports videos. Better: compiled many sports videos.
You said: Commercial by Youtube is spread a lot but sometimes they are fraud or fake. Correct: Commercial on Youtube is spreading a lot .....
You said: They targeting why it's fake.. Correct: They target why it's fake... or They're giving a thorough review of why it's fake... or They are targeting...
You said: They say they buy it by themselves. Correct: They say they bought it themselves. |