Class Feedback (수업 피드백) | |
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Level | Intermediate |
Date | 2022.10.16 22:00 Korean time |
Topic | Cosmetic Surgery |
Remarks |
Job well done today Chester~ The conversation flow is great and you used top-tier 2 vocabulary in the conversation. It shows that you are familiar with the topic that's why you gave great opinions and ideas. There are just a few corrections to the grammar. Overall, Keep up the excellent job~!
You said: They doesn't change their appearance. Correct: They don't change their appearance.
You said: How they are looking at me? Correct: How do they look at me? Better: How do they view me? or What do they think about my looks?
You said: They will get confident and lose trauma. Correct: They will be confident and lose trauma.
You said: The function will be progress and will be safe. Better: It will be more advanced and safe.
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