Class Feedback (수업 피드백) | |
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Level | High beginner |
Date | 2022.10.19 21:00 Korean time |
Topic | Pros & Cons - Writing and Speaking |
Remarks |
Great Job today Celina~ You participated well in class and you did the activity well. Your opinions are all great. There are just a few corrections to your grammar. You can check it below. Overall, Keep up the great job~!
SPEAKING: You said: Go to the army and back BTS. Correct: They will go to the army and then they will be back as BTS again.
You said: Before I said for you. Correct: I told you before.
You said: When we billionaire before we work very very very many effort. Correct: Before we become a billionaire we need to work very hard and put in a lot of effort.
WRITING: You wrote: Can play very wild. Correct: Can play intensive sports. for example, basketball and soccer.
You wrote: Do not celebratean anniverary , no fight or sad because of love. Correct: Do not celebrate the anniversary, You don't fight with others and you are not sad because of love.
You wrote: Many couples around for me. Correct: Many couples around me.
You wrote: near with mart and hospital etc. Correct: Near the mart and hospital, etc...
You wrote: But buy very very very very Lot of things. Correct: Overspending.
You wrote: Before billionare, Do very hard thing. Correct: Work harder than others to become a billionaire. |