Great Job today Celina~ You participated well in class and you did the activity well. Your opinions are all great. There are just a few corrections to your grammar. You can check it below. Overall, Keep up the great job~!

SPEAKING:

You said: Go to the army and back BTS.

Correct: They will go to the army and then they will be back as BTS again.

You said: Before I said for you.

Correct: I told you before.

You said: When we billionaire before we work very very very many effort.

Correct: Before we become a billionaire we need to work very hard and put in a lot of effort.

WRITING:

You wrote: Can play very wild.

Correct: Can play intensive sports. for example, basketball and soccer.

You wrote: Do not celebratean anniverary , no fight or sad because of love.

Correct: Do not celebrate the anniversary, You don't fight with others and you are not sad because of love.

You wrote: Many couples around for me.

Correct: Many couples around me.

You wrote: near with mart and hospital etc.

Correct: Near the mart and hospital, etc... 

You wrote: But buy  very very very very   Lot of things.

Correct: Overspending.

You wrote: Before billionare, Do very hard thing.                    

Correct: Work harder than others to become a billionaire.