Exercising

1. Speaking

You said: I try to walk fastly.

Better way to say it: I try to do brisk walking.

2. Vocabulary

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3. Grammar

“Do you know meaning of sedentary?” = Do you know the meaning of sedentary?

“I come to mind usually positive words.” = What comes to my mind are usually positive words.

“Exercise is good way to make our physical and mental health.” = Exercise is a good way to make our

physical and mental health better.

“How often do you house chores?” = How often do you do house chores?

“it demands on” = it depends on

As me, I do yoga at home. = As for me, I do yoga at home.

4. Writing

Exercise can help our physical and mental heath beteer.

• Exercise can help our physical and mental health better.

I try do yoga every day. before going to bed. It make me feel fresh.

• I try to do yoga every day before going to bed. It makes me feel fresh and rejuvenated.

You need to excercise more. Because you live a sadentary life You don't move much less than you think. You injured your body after a long time.

• You need to exercise more because you are living a sedentary lifestyle. You don’t move much than you think. You will injure your body after a long time.

We can use wachting on Youtube that all kinds of program. So we cad choose that we like.

• We can watch YouTube videos for some exercise programs. We can choose those we want to do.

Exercise can make our body as fit as fiddle. (GOOD JOB)

When I am sick to exercise rehuraly,  my  body health is to be back my feet.

• When I’m sick but exercise regularly, I can get back on my feet right away.

When I eat pork organ, it gives me to turn my stomach.

• When I eat pork organ, it turns my stomach.

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