Class Feedback (수업 피드백) | |
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Level | High beginner |
Date | 2022.11.09 21:00 Korean time |
Topic | Speaking: What are the reasons? |
Remarks |
You did an amazing job today Celina~! Your answers are all great and your opinions are interesting. There are just a few corrections to your grammar. The questions that you made are also good. Keep up the great job~!
You said: Because people like fat food hamburger, pizza like this and they want to do exercise but they're only thinking. Correct: People like to eat fatty foods. For example, hamburgers and pizza. And they want to exercise but they don't do it.
You said: Because we don't have rules in country, people can fight well and many people kill and traffic problem. Correct: If we son't have rules in our country. it will be messy. People will be violent and there will be a lot of crimes will happen.
You said: Because if people want to diet and to good healthy nice body. Correct: People go on a diet because they want to have a good, healthy, and nice body.
You wrote: Why people wants to success the diet? Correct: Why do people want to have a successful diet?
You wrote: Parents say lot of "Study",Why? Correct: Parents always say "Study hard". Why? |