Class Feedback (수업 피드백) | |
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Level | Intermediate |
Date | 2022.11.13 22:00 Korean time |
Topic | Poverty |
Remarks |
You did an awesome job today~ Thank you for sharing your ideas and opinions. You were able to explain them clearly and you gave supporting details as well. Keep up the great job~!
Below are some of your answers and another way to say them.
You said: For example, African people lack water but some company make something that's why it's easier for them to have water and some company also make/donate vaccine like for malaria also for them. Better: For example, In Africa, they lack water but with the help of some companies it is more accessible to them, and also some companies donate vaccines for malaria to them.
You said: Many country help and spread our prosperity do donation and help. Better: There are many countries that help by spreading their prosperity through donations.
You said: For poor people because of disasters/ accidents/ building accidents . .. Better: For poor people because of fortuitous events.
You said: Because of the pandemic the price is going crazy that's why poor people are getting poor. Better: Due to the pandemic the prices are insane that's why poor people are getting poorer. |