Class Feedback (수업 피드백) | |
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Level | High Beginner |
Date | 11/13, 13:00-13:50 Korean Time |
Topic | Travel |
Remarks |
LEVEL: High Beginner CLASS PROGRESS: 11/13, 13:00-13:50 Korean Time
You said: big reason Better way to say it: main purpose
You said: spread widely Better way to say it: became a pandemic
You said: facilities Better way to say it: amenities
Rhinitis videoing
“I think, my opinion” = In my opinion “2019 in January” = in January 2019 “in the beginners = in the beginning “a little communisism” = a little communist “I have been three countries.” = I have been to three countries. “in myself” = on my own “I am film.” = I am filming. “It occurs a lot of criminal.” = There are a lot of criminals.
vacation = /ve-key-shon/ not /vo-key-shon/ luggage = /luh-geyj/ not /luh-gey-ji/ uncomfortable = /an-kmof-ta-bl/
I want to Gaum again. I have good memories there and we could spend relax.
We experiend snowcooling at first time. two place inside the hote and ocean. It was a very nice. If we have this activy in Korea, we spend a lot of money.
My family promised to travel there so I wnto to go with my family.
Overall Feedback: Continue to practice speaking and writing in English, Jiyoung. Review the corrections made in your sentences.
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