1. Speaking

You said: twice a month

Better way to say it: bimonthly

2. Grammar

“10 person” = 10 people

“he go” = he goes

“He have dinner.” = He has dinner.

“2 or 3 water” = 2 or 3 glasses of water

“make me wake” = makes me awake

3. Pronunciation

challenge = /cha-lenj/ not /cha-len-ji/

English = /ing-lish/ not /ing-li-shi/

work = /work/ not /wor-ki/

and =/end/ not en-di/

4. Writing

I drink coffee and prpared  meals and clean my house.

• I drink coffee, prepare the meals and clean my house regularly.

I make meals at fixed time for my mother. So I set meal time.

• I make meals at a fixed time for my mother so I set a reminder for it.

Yes, because I do it every day, dust field any time.

• I do it every day so the dust won't get accumulated.

*My house chores are easy because I do them every day. There is not much dust accumulated.

Overall Feedback:

Continue conversing in English every chance you get, Marie. Remember not to have those extra sounds at the end of some of your words so that they will come out properly pronounced.