| Class Feedback (수업 피드백) | |
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| Level | High beginner |
| Date | 2022.11.23 21:00 Korean time |
| Topic | Speaking: What would happen? |
| Remarks |
You did an amazing job Celina~ Your ideas are great and you gave examples to support your answers. Very good! You improved a lot. There are just a few grammar corrections. Keep up the great job~
You said: People start getting fat and many people get adult disease like diabetes and high blood pressure. Correct: People will start to get fat and many people will have diseases like diabetes and high blood pressure.
You said: I not eat every day. Correct: I don't eat it every day.
You said: Officer can't send some files. Correct: Corporate worker/ Office worker can't send files.
You said: Korea People demonstration... Correct: Koreans will strike
You said: But parents want children academy. Correct: but parents would like their children to go to the academy.
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