You did an amazing job, Celina~ Your pronunciation and intonations are great. When it comes to speaking there are a few grammar corrections. Remember if you're talking about the past use past tenses. When it comes to vocabulary, very good because you understand all of them. Overall, keep up the great job~

You said: He buy 8 albums.

Correct: He bought 8 albums.

You said: And another friend is go to Soobin's birthday yesterday.

Correct: And another friend went to Soobin's birthday yesterday.

You said: He says always TXT.

Correct: He talks about TXT a lot of times. / He always talks about TXT.

Pronunciation:

-lives

-society