1. Speaking

You said: the connection not nice

Better way to say it: the connection is not good

You said: I want to do a challenge different from others.

Better way to say it: I wanted to do a unique challenge.

You said: in personal

Better way to say it: personally

You said: she is the last

Better way to say it: she is the youngest

2. Vocabulary

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3. Grammar

“I’m going to busy during this week.” =I’m going to be busy this week.

“my elder son” = my eldest son

“after goes time” = “as time goes by”

“I cheered up them.” = I cheered them up.

“All of babies have pure.” = All babies are pure.

“repeat tune” = repeated tune

“When I grew my children” = When I raised my children

“be apart their mom” = be separated from their mom

4. Pronunciation

finished = /fi-nisht/ not /fi-ni-shed/

puberty = /pyu-ber-ti/ not /pa-ber-ti/

5. Writing

A family get a taxi to go to a travel. get a car. The father drive to the destination and they arrive a hotl. After then they tuor the area by bus. They enjoy the sightseeing.

• A family went on a vacation. They travelled by car. The father drove to their destination. They arrived at their hotel. After that, they toured the area by bus. They enjoyed sightseeing.

A baby slept alone. He woke up becase he was hugry. So his mom rushed him and went to kitchen. She gave his milk and he felt satisfied. And then he fell asleep again.

• A baby was sleeping in his crib. He woke up because he was hungry. His mom rushed to his side and took him to the kitchen. She gave him some milk and was satisfied. He then fell asleep again.

Overall Feedback:

Great job in sharing what happened in your “challenge activity”, Jiyoung. Keep them coming. J