Appearance

1. Speaking

You said: I am a fatty person.

Better way to say it: I am a chubby person.

You said: but my wife won’t let her go

Better way to say it: but my wife won’t allow it

2. Vocabulary

playmates

Cleanliness is next to godliness.

3. Grammar

“We gonna sing the musicals.” = We sang Christmas carols.

“in my opinions” = in my opinion

“I don’t know she’s name.” = I don’t know her name.

“when I young” = if I were young

“When I young it was very popular.” = When I was young, it was very popular.

4. Pronunciation

voice = /voys/ not /boys/

safe = /seyf/ not /seyp/

if = /if/ not /ip/

before = /bi-for/ not /bi-por/

Overall Feedback:

Continue conversing in English every chance you get, Max. Remember to pronounce /f/ and /p/ properly.