Rules

1. Speaking

You said: before my dad go away

Better way to say it: before my dad passed away

You said: submit papers

Better way to say it: submit documents

You said: Sometimes the laws are made against the poor.

Better way to say it: Sometimes the laws are not in favor of the poor.

2. Vocabulary

envelope

pedestrian lane

pedestrian

3. Grammar

“other relations” = other relatives

“many company“= many companies

“I come to mind the word law”= What comes to my mind when I hear the word law is

“time goes by” = as time goes by

4. Pronunciation

bought = /bot/ not /bowt/

5. Writing

It helps to protect the nation and to keep social order for us.

• It helps protect the nation and keep our social order.
• It is important to pay attention to rules to protect the nation and to keep our social order.

We try to keep thr rules.

• We try to obey the rules.

The social happen disorder and criminal.

• There will be no order in the society and there will be a lot of criminals.

If you don't follow the rules you are selfish. We must obey the rules duty.

• If you don’t follow the rules you are selfish. It is our duty to obey the rules at all times.

Overall Feedback:

Continue conversing in English every chance you get, Jiyoung. In writing, keep your sentences as descriptive as possible.