1. Speaking

You said: a lot of respect

Better way to say it: immense respect for the elderly

2. Vocabulary

hospice

holi

translation app

immense

3. Grammar

“it was happened” = it so happened that

“She just want to take care of her.” = She just want to take care of herself.

“During 2 weeks she got better.” = For 2 weeks she got better.

“five time a week” = five times a week

“When we eat we don't noise.” = When we eat we don't make noise.

“conservation family” = conservative family

“my family in-laws” = my in-laws

4. Pronunciation

sacred = /sey-kred/

5. Writing

Most of all, I want to speak to foreigner in English. It is my goal.

• I want to be able to speak to foreigner in English. It is my goal.

We have a smart phone individualy. So using it we can get everything.

• We have our individual smart phone. By using it, we can learn all information we needed.

We can do not rude to forighner and enjoy the curture a lot.

• By learning their culture we avoid being rude to the foreigners. We will also enjoy their culture a lot.

• We can learn some good things for our life. (Good job!)

Overall Feedback:

A lot of sentences properly delivered, Jiyoung. Keep it up.