Speaking: You did better this time when speaking. You tried your best to maintain your fluency with the use of words like 'Well'. Just be careful not to overuse it. You also responded with little hesitation to questions. There were times when you had some difficulty responding and some questions had to be repeated or simplified but it didn't greatly affect the smooth flow of the conversation.

Grammar: Please take note of your errors:

You said: My city is hot than other city.

Correct: My city is hotter than other cities.

You said: talking about while eating snacks

Correct: chatting while eating snacks

You said: My favorite food made of mommy.

Correct: My favorite food made by my mommy.

You said: Sometimes, our family delivery food.

Correct: Sometimes, my family orders delivery food.  

You said: nearby my apartment

Correct: near my apartment

Vocabulary: Please take note of these words and phrases:

go sledding

sweeth tooth

cake and pastries

good self-control

porridge

favorite variant

*variant: kind or type

siblings: brother or sister

ready-to-cook

Pronunciation: Please take note of these words and how to pronounce them:

*familiar /fuh-mihl-yuhr/

​​Overall Feedback: Take note of the common errors you make in grammar and go over the corrections. This will help prepare you to do self-corrections in the future whenever you make a mistake. ^^ Keep up the good work!