Great Job today Celina~ It was a new style of the lesson today but you were able to adjust and do it. Even though it was quite difficult you were able to answer the questions well and you were able to explain your opinions clearly. But there are some grammar errors and a better way to say it. below are the corrections.

You said: It makes me success.

Correct: It makes me successful.

You said: When I listen muscic ans play.

Correct: When I listen to music and play.

You said: My friend sister go to Yonsei University.

Correct: My friend's sister goes to Yonsei University.

You said: I will more do something. For example, I fail about the drawing and I am drawing everyday.

Better way: I will do something more often. For example, If I failed in drawing, I will practice more and work harder.