1. Speaking

You said: I scold his name in the air.

Better way to say it: I called out his name into the air.

You said: I scold

Better way to say it: I shrieked

You said: cheer

Better way to say it: support

You said: graduate school

Better way to say it: Master’s degree

2. Vocabulary

course

*for no reason at all

unconsciously

3. Grammar

“operation back” = back operation

“I went to there for picking her house.” = I went there to pick her up.

“My husband and I against it”. = My husband and I are against it.

4. Pronunciation

revenge = /ri-venj/

café = /ka-fey/ not /ka-pe/

spirit = /is-pi-rit/ not /is-prit/

5. Writing

Yes, I have disappointed by the outcome of a match.

That  happened during the 2018 PyeongChang Winter Olympics. Our skating team players lost. One of them, Noh Seon-yeong, revealed the reason that they lost the game. That’s why she was bullied from their team.

The entire nation was surprised. People regared her pity and complained to the skating federation. It was a very big event.

However a couple of years later, it came out that she lied.

Her own trouble ruined a big internationl game. It was disappointed bittly.

CORRECTION:

Yes, I have been let down by the outcome of a game. This occurred during the PyeongChang Winter Olympics in 2018. Our skaters were defeated. Noh Seon-yeong, one of them, revealed why they lost the game. She was bullied out of the team. The entire country was taken aback. People expressed their sympathy for her and complained to the skating federation. It was a huge occasion.

However, it was discovered a few years later that she had lied. Her own misfortune ruined a major international game. It was bitterly disappointing.

I have lived in an apartment in Seoul, South Korea. There is a well-known mountain, called Gwanaksan nearby. We can enjoy the beauty of all four seasons. So the air is clearer here than anywhere else. There is near a small river where we can go for a walk along the river. The neiborhood is very peaceful. And there are uniq cafes where we can study during the daytime because there is near a unversity.  The street have named Sharosu-gil. When night comes many students and people enjoy achol and have a talk at restaurants.  We can feel the spirit of youth. So it is crowded with lots of people at night.

CORRECTION:

I have lived in an apartment in Seoul, South Korea. Gwanaksan, a well-known mountain, is nearby. We can appreciate the splendor of all four seasons. As a result, the air is cleaner here than anywhere else. There is a small river nearby where we can go for a walk. The neighborhood is very quiet. There are also unique cafes where we can study during the day because it is close to a university. Sharosu-gil is the name of the street. When night falls, many students and people go out to eat, drink and talk in restaurants. We can sense the youthful spirit. As a result, it is very crowded at night.

I like my neighborhood. I have been here for more than two years. I lived the area where have lots of institute before. I lived there just for my children’s study.

Most of facilities exist for the benefit of students. So it wasn’t diverse and it was crowded with people and many cars.

In comparison, my neighborhood now is very peaceful. There is a well-known mountain called Gwanaksan near by. The air is cleaner than anywhere else. Lots of people visit to climb the mountain. There are also uniq cafes where I can study and resturants sells delicious food. Because there is a university near my neghborhood. At night, I can drink and have a conversation with my family or my friends.

So I live here with full of young.

CORRECTION:

My neighborhood appeals to me. I've been here for over two years. I used to live in an area with a lot of institutes. I only lived there for my children's studies. The majority of facilities exist to benefit students. As a result, it lacked diversity and was overcrowded with people and cars.

In comparison, my neighborhood now is very quiet. It is near Gwanaksan, a well-known mountain. The air is cleaner here than it is anywhere else. Many people come to climb the mountain. Because there’s a university close by, there are unique cafes where I can study, as well as restaurants that serve delicious food. I can also drink and talk with my family or friends late at night.

I live in a place full of young people.

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