Great Job Today Celina~ You participated well in class and you were able to answer the questions well. Keep up the great job~ There are just a few corrections.

You said:Because many entertainment have demanding conditions. Can sing well and dancing. Can't eat delicious food only pretty and thin.

Correct: Because most entertainments have demanding conditions. For example, They need to be very talented; they can sing well and dance well, They have a strict diet, and They must look pretty and thin.

You said: Because many people likes some  celebrity and spend some money for them. 

Correct: Because a lot of people like celebrities and they spend money on them.

You said: when TXT  has live and suddenly bell ring their lodging  , so yeongju go out no person but they quit the room.

Correct: During TXT's live broadcast, the bell suddenly rang in their accommodation, so Yeongjun checked and when he opened the door no one is there.

You said: They are lose weight then difficult to meet bF and GF and many weird picture.

Correct: They need to lose weight, they don't have privacy and they have a lot of weird photos online.