Class Feedback (수업 피드백) | |
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Level | High beginner |
Date | 2023.04.10 21:00 Korean time |
Topic | Speaking: Parties |
Remarks |
Great job today Celina~ You participated in class, and even though you don't feel well you attend our class. Thank you for coming and I hope you get well soon. You did your best answering the questions and sharing your opinions. Keep up the great job~ There are just a few grammar corrections please check below.
SPEAKING: You said: Good party for me delicious food. Correct: A good party for me is a party with delicious food.
You said: Surpise party my friend go to canada in this april 28 so were do surprise party when his birthday but he knows this plan. Correct: It's a surprise party my friend will go to Canada this April 28 so we planned a surprise party on his birthday but he knows the plan.
You said: Hotels and party halls because when party in peoples house were decorating and cleaning and I think neighbors will not like because of noise.
Correct: Hotels and party halls because when we have a party in someone's house we need to decorate and clean the place. And I think the neighbors will not like it because of the noise.
WRITING: You wrote: My worst party is last year pajama party. Because We are only sleep. No eating snacks, no food, no TV. Only sleep. My friend said this party is very boring. And my best party is My frined's birthday part. Because we wenr to the lotteworld, rode many extreme things, and many delicious food. Last, I am party starter. Because I always start something and lead. Correct: My worst party was last year, it was a pajama party. Because we slept only. No eating of snacks, no food, no TV.. just sleep. My friend said this party is very boring. And my best party is My friend's birthday party. When we went to Lotte World, we rode many extreme rides, and there were a lot of delicious foods. Last, I am a party starter. Because I always start something and lead. |