| Class Feedback (수업 피드백) | |
|---|---|
| Level | Intermediate |
| Date | 2023.04.30 22:00 Korean time |
| Topic | Ted Talk: Solar Energy |
| Remarks |
Amazing job today Chester~ You answered the questions well and you shared your insights and opinions clearly. You also used great vocabulary. There are just a few corrections especially the use of a/an/the. Overall, Keep up the Great job~
You said: Seoul is most concentrated city in Korea when it comes to population. Correct: Seoul is the most concentrated city in Korea when it comes to population.
You said: Renewables could be a solution for next generation in the earth. Correct: Renewables could be a solution for the next generation on the earth. Better: Renewables could be a solution for the future generation.
You said: ... safe energy in the Korea ... Correct: ...safe energy in Korea ....
You said: I think it depends of weather and climate. Correct: I think it will depend on the weather and the climate.
You said: All cars had the ceiling so we can put some solar panel. Correct: All cars have a ceiling so we can put a solar panel. |
