1. Vocabulary

convent

monastery

shout

2. Grammar

“It is hard to pronunciation.” = It is hard to pronounce the words.

“We did not touch as many times.” = We haven't had many interactions or communications.

after time goes = as time went by

3. Pronunciation

exhilarating = /eg-zi-li-rey-ting/

cuisine = /kwuh-zin/

refreshed = /ref-resht/

Overall Feedback:

Good job with having lesser grammatical errors in your writing, Jiyoung. Keep up the good work. Keep practicing continuously.