Free Talking

1. Speaking

You said: It will last August.

Better way to say it: It will continue until August.

You said: Seoul official

Better way to say it: Seoul local government

You said: when I write the application

Another way to say it: when I answered/filled out the application

You said: after that cause

Better way to say it: after that incident

You said: get information

Another way to say it: get ideas

You said: so quickly increasing

Another way to say it: developing fast

thirty and three = 3:30 three thirty

2. Grammar

my elder/younger sister couple = = my elder/younger sister and her husband

users are little = users are a few

                3. Vocabulary

twinning

hiker

mountain climbing

bonding time

Overall Feedback:

I appreciate your dedication to learning and improving, Jiyoung. J Keep it up!