Class Feedback (수업 피드백) | |
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Level | Low Beginner |
Date | 2023.07.24 21:00 Korean time |
Topic | Free Talking: Ryan's Toy Collection |
Remarks |
Awesome job today Ryan~ You talked a lot and shared your toy collection with me. Thank you for sharing it. I am surprised that you remembered all of your toys cause you have a lot. It was interesting and I know you want to share more but it's already time. There are some grammar errors. Especially when you are talking about past events remember to use a past tense form of the verb. Overall, it was a great discussion and keep up the great job~
You said: He is no face. Correct: He doesn't have a face.
You said: So many time raining. Correct: It rained a lot.
You said: Because I go to the my friends house. Correct: Because I went to my friend's house.
You said: This is more than my height. Correct: This is taller than me.
You said: It will not get it because it's weak. Correct: It can't claw anything because it's weak.
You said: I trash the small one. Correct: I threw the small one away.
You said: This my friend gave me. Correct: This was given by my friend. |