Student : Eddie
Teacher : Camille
Topic : Business trip on Bangkok
I have been working in F&B company and operating my brand well (Cafe, Bakery)
It is firt time that i have been Bankok for my business trip to search motivate items.
I have been there with my co-workers and boss and experienced lots of things.
I will tell you what I got it in Bankok.
First of all, Bangkok is higher level than I thought in most area.
Especially, Bankok is famous for food and beverage like coffee, shaving ice, thia food and also leisure.
One of the most memorable thing is shaving ice brand which calls AFTERYOU.
This brand has been already listed in Thiland investment and almost twenty stores opened.
When i had shaving ice in AFTERYOU at first time, It was really excellent. Because, It was so soft and proper sweetness that I thought it was good balanced.
Secondly, It is so cleaner and safer than I thought.
Honestly, It is cleaner than Korea in some specific area and many people are kind.
When I was in other country, I should watch out myself and keep my wallet and luggage.
But Bangkok is not like that and I felt more comfortable.
Above all, most services are satisfied and comfortable.
Especially, I had been staying in Waldorf Astoria Bangkok.
When I was in front desk, I got shocked because of great scent. It was only for the hotel and I finally bought the scent candle. Additionally, the hotel condition and service is the best place that I have ever been.
I think that It was unforgettable business trip in my life.
I have been upgrading my brand by using this experience such as develop my customized scent, signature Korean shaving ice and overall things.
Absolutely, I recommended Bangkok to you and If you have chance to go there, you should not hesitate.
Here are your corrections:
It is firt time that i have been Bankok for my business trip to search motivate items.
==> It is my first time in Bangkok for a business trip.
One of the most memorable thing is shaving ice brand which calls AFTERYOU.
==> One of the most memorable things is the shaved ice which is called AFTERYOU.
When i had shaving ice in AFTERYOU at first time, It was really excellent. Because, It was so soft and proper sweetness that I thought it was good balanced.
==> The fist time I had the shaved ice, I thought it was really excellent. It was so soft and just had the proper sweetness for balance.