When I started witing texts in English every day, I broght a box of pen that consists of 12 colors.
The price is very cheap but the quality is good and all colors of them are pretty.
I almost use them around 8 mounths but they are still available.
I've been using them uuntil now and they've become one of ( ? ) my favorite pens.
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When I started witing texts in English every day, I broght a box of pen that consists of 12 colors.
==> When I started writing texts in English every day, I bought a box of pens that consists of 12 colors.
The price is very cheap but the quality is good and all colors of them are pretty.
==> The price is very cheap but the quality is good and all of their colors are pretty.
I almost use them around 8 mounths but they are still available.
==> I have been using them for almost around 8 months but they are still functional.
I've been using them uuntil now and they've become one of ( ? ) my favorite pens.
==> I've been using them until now and they've become some of my favorite pens.