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There is the tallest building as known Lotte Tower in Seou, Korea.

The signiel hotel is in  that building.

I went there yesterday.

It was my first time there.

It wasn't flashy (or amazing ?? ) than I thought. 

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    0001_Rach 2022.08.22 22:10

    Hi~
     

    This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:

     

    There is the tallest building as known Lotte Tower in Seou, Korea.

    ==> There is the tallest building known as Lotte Tower in Seoul, Korea.

    The signiel hotel is in that building.

    ==> The Signiel hotel is in that building.

    I went there yesterday.

    It was my first time there.

    It wasn't flashy (or amazing ?? ) than I thought. 

    ==> It wasn't as flashy (or amazing ?? ) as I thought. 

     

    • Take note of your spelling or typo errors: 'Seoul', and 'Signiel' (capitalize the first letter of proper nouns)
    • vocabulary: the phrase should be 'known as'
    • comparatives: when comparing things that should be the same, use 'as + adjective + as' (ex: as flashy as)
    • I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~
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    im_fairyofshampoo 2022.08.24 17:33

    Thank you so much~~~.

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