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We always have to wear a mask because the Coronavirus pandemic is not over.

However we can take off the mask while we have a meal at a restaurant or drink a tea at a cafe.

We sometimes lose our masks to take off.

So I alway take an extra mask just in case. ^^

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    0001_Rach 2022.08.31 23:59

    Hi~
     

    This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:

     

    We always have to wear a mask because the Coronavirus pandemic is not over.

    However we can take off the mask while we have a meal at a restaurant or drink a tea at a cafe.

    ==> However, we can take off our masks while we have a meal at a restaurant or drink tea at a cafe.

    We sometimes lose our masks to take off.

    ==> We sometimes lose our masks when we take them off.

    So I alway take an extra mask just in case. ^^

    ==> So I always take or bring an extra mask with me just in case. ^^

     

    • articles: In your sentence, it is better and more specific to use 'our' instead of the article 'the'
    • non-count nouns: 'tea' is non-count so you shouldn't use 'a' or 'an' before them.
    • 'bring' vs 'take': In your sentence, 'bring' or 'take' can be used but better to add 'with me'.
    • I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~

     

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    im_fairyofshampoo 2022.09.02 21:23
    Thank you so much~~~.^^

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