I got a new laptop from my husband.
It touched me deeply.
So I want to record my practice on You Tube.
I start writing English texts for 20 minutes.
I study basic conversation watching Minimal Englich channel.
I study longer sentences watching Live Academy channel.
I organize what I studies on T-story.
And then I read texts that I'm going to write tomorrow for 20 minutes.
I can read that over 20 times.
Hi~
This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:
I got a new laptop from my husband.
It touched me deeply.
So I want to record my practice on You Tube.
==> So I want to record my practice on YouTube.
I start writing English texts for 20 minutes.
==> I start by writing English texts for 20 minutes.
I study basic conversation watching Minimal Englich channel.
==> I study basic conversation by watching the Minimal English channel.
I study longer sentences watching Live Academy channel.
==> I study longer sentences by watching the Live Academy channel.
I organize what I studies on T-story.
==> I organize what I study on T-story.
And then I read texts that I'm going to write tomorrow for 20 minutes.
==> And then I read texts that I'm going to write the next day for 20 minutes.
I can read that over 20 times.
You did very well~ You were able to organize and talk about your routine clearly. Your errors are as follows:
preposition: It will be better to add 'by' before the verb -ing since you are talking about some method you are doing.
article: You should add 'the' before a name of a channel you watch, especially if it includes the word 'channel' in the name.
adverb: Use 'the next day' instead if you mean something regular and not just the specific day after today.
I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~