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Hi, Junwoo. 

Did you have a good sleep?

If you are busy, you don't have to come.

I can bring you something that you need.

I think that is just go for a drive.. ^^

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    0341_Gee 2022.10.14 23:21
    Hi, It's Teacher Gee again.
    Let me help you with this ( just minor corrections)


    1. Did you have a good sleep?
    >. Did you sleep well?

    2. If you are busy, you don't have to come.
    or
    >You don’t have to come If you’re busy
    or
    > There’s no need for you to come if you’re busy

    3. I can bring you something that you need or
    > If you need something, I can bring it to you.
    or
    > If you need anything, I can get it for you

    4. I think that is just go for a drive.. ^^

    > I think that it just goes for a drive
    or
    > I think that it is just going for a drive.


    Key points
    1. Did is used to indicate past tense. However, the verb should be in the present tense.
    2. Your sentences for the second and third line is okay, but rephrasing them for the clarity of the sentences.
    3. In the last sentence " I think that is just go for a ride " - change the verb form for clarity of the sentence.


    I hope this will helps. I am so happy to see you active on this site.
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    im_fairyofshampoo 2022.10.15 10:27
    Thank you so much~~. I am also happy to see you on this site again. Thank you for helping me. Have a good day.~~^^

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