1. I go to a cafe for studying early in the morning.
I should go out the cafe if it is crowded.
Oh, it's quiet and nice.
Let's study with me for 20 minutes.
2. I go to the laundromat from time to time.
The one I go to is a 24 hour place and a new.
Everything there is clean and automated.
Hi~
This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:
1. I go to a cafe for studying early in the morning.
I should go out the cafe if it is crowded.
==> I should go out of the cafe if it is crowded.
Oh, it's quiet and nice.
==> Oh, it's quiet and nice today. (better)
Let's study with me for 20 minutes.
==> Let's study for 20 minutes.
2. I go to the laundromat from time to time.
The one I go to is a 24 hour place and a new.
==> The one I go to is a 24-hour place and a new one.
Everything there is clean and automated.
Good job~! You used a number of new vocabulary! Please take note of these errors:
*preposition: You should "of" after "go out" if you're going to include where.
*Vocabulary: Using "let's" can already mean "together" or "with", so it can be repetitive to add "with me" after it.
*Hyphen: Add a hyphen (-) between a number and the noun after it if it is used as an adjective (ex: 25-minute break, 2-year-old boy)
I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~ ^^