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I wasn't feeling well when I got up this mornig.

I slept but I am so tird.

What makes me feel bad is a cat that my youger sister look after a few days ago.

Because I am allergic to cats and dogs.  ^^

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    0001_Rach 2022.10.21 19:42

    Hi~
     

    This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:

     

    I wasn't feeling well when I got up this mornig.

    ==> I wasn't feeling well when I got up this morning.

    I slept but I am so tird.

    ==> I slept but I am so tired.

    What makes me feel bad is a cat that my youger sister look after a few days ago.

    ==> What makes me feel unwell is a cat that my younger sister asked me to look after a few days ago.

    Because I am allergic to cats and dogs.  ^^

     

    Very good~! Your errors are quite minor. Please take note of these:

    *spelling: Please take note of the correct spelling of "morning", "younger", and "tired".

    *vocabulary: "to feel bad" is more related to emotions, but "to feel unwell" has something to do with physical sickness.

    *verb: You should add "asked me to" before "look after" to make it clear that it is you who looked after the cat.


    I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~

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    im_fairyofshampoo 2022.10.22 19:27
    Oh my.. spelling...~ Thank you so much~~.

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