Winter comes around the corner.
I feel I'm getting weaker because of chainging season.
So I have nutritional supplement every day to raise my immune system. ^^
Winter comes around the corner.
I feel I'm getting weaker because of chainging season.
So I have nutritional supplement every day to raise my immune system. ^^
Hi~
This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:
Winter comes around the corner.
==> Winter is just around the corner.
I feel I'm getting weaker because of chainging season.
==> I feel I'm getting weaker because of changing seasons.
So I have nutritional supplement every day to raise my immune system. ^^
==> So I take a nutritional supplement every day to raise my immune system. ^^
Well done~! Your errors are quite minor. Please take note of these:
*expression: The right expression is "It's just around the corner".
*noun form: When using the word 'changing', the noun after it is usually in the plural form.
*vocabulary: It's better to use the verb 'take' when talking about medication/supplements
I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~