When my kids were young, we went on a trip frequently.
Now they are grown up, we have to make own shedule each other to go on a trip. ^^
When my kids were young, we went on a trip frequently.
Now they are grown up, we have to make own shedule each other to go on a trip. ^^
Hi~
This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:
When my kids were young, we went on a trip frequently.
Now they are grown up, we have to make own shedule each other to go on a trip. ^^
==> Now they are grown up, so we have to make our own schedules to go on a trip. ^^
Keep it up~! Your errors are quite minor. Please take note of these:
*conjunction: You should add the conjunction 'so' to connect clauses in your sentence. You can also separate the clauses into two sentences.
*spelling: Please double-check for spelling errors like in the word, 'schedule'.
*pronoun: It will be better to add "our" (possessive pronouns) when you use 'own' instead of each other.
I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~