Today, I had an English class at home.
After the class, it was way past lunch time.
Usually I would just scrounge.
But my mom was waiting for me.
So I went a burger place and I bought some burgers quickly. ^^
Today, I had an English class at home.
After the class, it was way past lunch time.
Usually I would just scrounge.
But my mom was waiting for me.
So I went a burger place and I bought some burgers quickly. ^^
Hi~
This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:
Today, I had an English class at home.
After the class, it was way past lunch time.
==> After the class, it was way past lunchtime.
Usually I would just scrounge.
==> Usually, I would just throw something together.
But my mom was waiting for me.
So I went a burger place and I bought some burgers quickly. ^^
==> So I went to a burger place and I bought some burgers quickly. ^^
Great job~! You used many good expressions. Please take note of these errors:
*spelling: Please double-check for spelling errors like lunchtime
*punctuation: Make sure to add a comma (, ) after an adverb like 'usually' if you put it at the beginning of your sentence.
*vocabulary: "scrounge" means to get things, especially money or food, by asking for them instead of buying them or working for them. A better vocabulary will be "throw something together", which means 'to make something (like a meal) quickly and not very carefully.
I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~