I sometimes go to a big market that I like.
It take about thirty minues by car.
Whenever I go there, I buy as many as things I can.
Because it is hard to get there often.
The problem is that I have a little bit small refrigerator to put all of them.
So after I put them in, it is mixed up inside. ^^
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This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:
I sometimes go to a big market that I like.
It take about thirty minues by car.
==> It takes about thirty minutes by car.
Whenever I go there, I buy as many as things I can.
Because it is hard to get there often.
==> Whenever I go there, I buy as many things as I can. because it is hard to get there often. OR Because it is hard to get there often, I buy as many things as I can. whenever I go there.
The problem is that I have a little bit small refrigerator to put all of them.
So after I put them in, it is mixed up inside. ^^
Well done~! Your errors are quite minor. Keep up the good work! Please take note of these errors:
*subject-verb agreement: It takes about thirty minutes by car. (A singular pronoun like 'it' should be followed by a verb in its singular form.)
*spelling: Please check the correct spelling of 'minutes '.
*conjunction: Because it is hard to get there often, I buy as many things as I can. whenever I go there.
(It is okay to begin your sentence with "because" but you have to make sure that the sentence is complete).
I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~