The Luna New Year is coming three days later.
I cook some kinds of Jeon every year so I prepare ingredents for them ahead.
In my case, it takes three days making all of them.
The most difficult for me is to trim vegetables.
I did it today when the first day of the three.
I felt pain in my wrist because I'm order than last year. ^^
Please correct these sentences and make them better.
I don't get hurt so I want better expressions.
Thank you so much.~~^^
Hi~
This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:
The Luna New Year is coming three days later.
==> The Lunar New Year is coming three days later.
I cook some kinds of Jeon every year so I prepare ingredents for them ahead.
==> I cook some kinds of Jeon every year so I prepare ingredients for them ahead of time.
In my case, it takes three days making all of them.
==> In my case, it takes three days to make all of them.
The most difficult for me is to trim vegetables.
I did it today when the first day of the three.
==> I did it today on the first day of the three.
I felt pain in my wrist because I'm order than last year. ^^
==> I felt pain in my wrist because I'm older than last year. ^^
Well done~! Please take note of these errors and some suggested expressions:
*spelling: Please double-check the misspelled words in your sentences (Lunar, ingredients, and older)
*verb form: Use the infinitive, to + verb with the expression, 'it takes time/days/long'
*when: It can't be used like a preposition (ex: wrong: when Saturday, when the second day; correct: when baking a cake, when I sleep, when the day comes)
I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~