It has recorded frigid temperatures with bone chilling air a few days ago.
It is too cold to go outside.
The area where my youngest son is to serve military service is colder.
I'm worried that he is struggling a hard time. ^^
Please correct these sentences and make them better.
I don't get hurt so I want better expressions.
Thank you so much.~~^^
Hi~
This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:
It has recorded frigid temperatures with bone chilling air a few days ago.
==> Frigid temperatures with bone-chilling air was recorded a few days ago.
It is too cold to go outside.
The area where my youngest son is to serve military service is colder.
I'm worried that he is struggling a hard time. ^^
==> I'm worried that he is struggling or having a hard time.
Great job~! Please take note of these errors and some suggested expressions:
*symbol: Please add a hyphen (-) in adjectives such as bone-chilling.
*verb form: Use 'was' with the past participle 'recorded' unless you add 'been', then you can't use 'has' (ex: has been recorded)
*vocabulary: 'struggling' means 'having a hard time' so you can use either of the expressions but don't combine
I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~